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Monday 31 August 2015

Antarctica and the Arctic! Know the difference!

In Room 8, we did a quiz about the difference between the Arctic (North Pole) & the Antarctica (South Pole). We dragged icebergs  - worded with facts  - into the right pole and had to get 10 out of 10. This is a screenshot of my score.

Monday 24 August 2015

Garden Models

For our Garden Inquiry, Room 8 planned about how the garden would look like by making an accurate replica of the expected garden structures. Our group was entrusted to make models created from blu tack and wooden building blocks from drawings made by the Designer's group. 

Friday 7 August 2015

Te Reo - Making a Sandwich

WALT - recognise and use some food-related phrases.
.Te Reo Tupu - He Reo Ora      -  

We are Learning reo through using it in our everyday lives.
J - Homai he Image result for plate clip art
S - Anei he Image result for plate clip art.
J - Homai he Image result for bread clip art.
S - Anei he Image result for bread clip art.
J - He Image result for butter clip art.
S - Anei Image result for butter clip art.
J - He Image result for cheese clip art.
S - Anei.
J - Homai he Image result for lettuce clipart.
S - Anei he Image result for lettuce clipart.
J - He Image result for meat... he Image result for tomato, he Image result for salt clip art.
S - Anei.
J  - He ? He  Image result for bread clip art āno?
S - Anei.
J - Mmmmmmmhe tino reka!
S - Āe. He hanawiti Mmmmmmm.
J - Engari mā te manuhiri tenei. Manaakitia ō manuhiri i ngā wā katoa.

Thursday 6 August 2015

Advertisement Critique - Best Advertisement

Best Advertisement ever
  The act of giving and generosity has been repeated and lead to changes happening. It changed the old woman, the lady with her trolley, the dog, the woman and her daughter, the lady on the bus, the dying plant and a change in the man himself. It shows the amount of help one person can have.
  A woman has disbelief when the man first shares his bundle of bananas and responded with love from his act of kindness. The dog received generosity and showed him loyalty. The child received money and gave him a bow of thanks. The woman with her trolley received aid and treated him like a family.

  When the last 10 seconds shows all of the change made by the man, it shows life and happiness . The advertisement is trying to encourage viewers to help people out, even though it doesn’t give you fame or popularity, but a feel of emotions.

Best Advertisement Ever

WALHT - Develop understanding about ethos,pathos and logos

Persuasive strategy
Yes / No
How the author used it?
Claim – States the main  
point or stance
Yes
The reason of this ad was to support and maintain individuals who require aid and money. The advertisement inaugurates with an anonymous male providing a life-less plant with portion of leakage water.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
No

Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility
Yes
The act of giving and generosity repeated and the amount of change that has happened. It changed the old woman, the lady with trolley, the dog, the woman and her daughter, the lady on the bus, the dying plant and a change in himself. It shows the amount of care he has even though he has no idea who they are. He visits them every day trying to provide them with what they need.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
Yes
A woman has disbelief when the man first shares his bundle of bananas and responded with love from his act of kindness. The dog received generosity and showed him loyalty The child received money gave him a bow of thanks. The woman with her trolley received aid and treated him like a family.
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  facts to support the argument

No

Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  for the cause
Yes
When the last 10 seconds shows all of the change made by the man, it shows life, happiness and allegiance. The ad is trying to encourage their viewers to help people out, even though it doesn’t give you fame or popularity, but a feel of emotions.
Research – Uses studies and  
information to make the  
argument seem more convincing;  this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations.
No

Wednesday 5 August 2015

Cadbury Reading Analysis

LI - Develop understanding about ethos,pathos and logos

Persuasive strategy
Yes / No
How the author used it?
Claim – States the main  
point or stance
Yes
The writer cleverly uses the phrase “Don’t get caught!” and repeats it throughout the ad to grab and maintain the audience’s attention.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
Yes
Cadbury is a famous type of chocolate that was originally made in England in 1841 made by John Cadbury.  
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility
Yes
The advertisement uses a phrase- “This little angel has a secret love.” refers a primary school female student as an innocent little angel.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions

                                                  
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  facts to support the argument


The expression, “This ultimate double chocolate and simply irresistible flowing yolk will give it all away!”  describes the smooth double chocolate, caramel yolk filling, and creamy goodness included in their product.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  for the cause

They imply that they’re irresistible and tell their audience to buy them before they run out of stock.
Research – Uses studies and  
information to make the  
argument seem more convincing;  this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations.



Tuesday 4 August 2015

Cadbury Caramel Eggs

Cadbury Caramel Eggs


LI - write an advertising critique using ethos, pathos and logos.
The writer cleverly uses the phrase, “Don’t get caught!” and repeats it throughout the ad to grab and maintain the audience’s attention.


Cadbury is a famous type of chocolate that was originally made in England in 1841 made by John Cadbury.

The advertisement uses a phrase- “This little angel has a secret love.” refers a primary school female student as an innocent little angel.

The expression, “This ultimate double chocolate and simply irresistible flowing yolk will give it all away!” describes the smooth double chocolate, caramel yolk filling and creamy goodness included in their product.

They imply that they’re irresistible and tell their audience to buy them before shops start to run out of stock.