WALT use a venn to compare two characters in the story.
I know I have compared two characters in the story by describing the two characters what they did and write what they both wanted to know on the middle.
I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Mrs Dines.
Wednesday, 4 September 2013
Tuesday, 3 September 2013
Factory Persuasion Writing By Gabrielle
WALT - persuade people to build/not build a factory on our courts
I agree that we should have a factory on our courts.
If they build a factory, we can have a competition and if we can win, we can design our new playground using with a wooden castle obstacles. We can run and move our muscles and it is good for our body.
If they build a factory, we can have a CCTV. If we have CCTV, our school can be guarded by cameras and it can be easier to protect our Chromebooks.
If they build a factory, we can have a small car park to take over the old junior playground. I want it to be taken over so the bird turd on the old junior playground can be washed away.
If we have a factory on our courts, they can replace the old junior playground to a car park so the bird turd on the park can be taken away, our school can own a CCTV to watch the school so it can be easier to remember the thieve's face and we can own a playground so we can use our muscles to climb ladders and hang on monkey bars.\
I agree that we should have a factory on our courts.
If they build a factory, we can have a competition and if we can win, we can design our new playground using with a wooden castle obstacles. We can run and move our muscles and it is good for our body.
If they build a factory, we can have a CCTV. If we have CCTV, our school can be guarded by cameras and it can be easier to protect our Chromebooks.
If they build a factory, we can have a small car park to take over the old junior playground. I want it to be taken over so the bird turd on the old junior playground can be washed away.
If we have a factory on our courts, they can replace the old junior playground to a car park so the bird turd on the park can be taken away, our school can own a CCTV to watch the school so it can be easier to remember the thieve's face and we can own a playground so we can use our muscles to climb ladders and hang on monkey bars.\
Monday, 2 September 2013
Writing - Activities
WALT - create a structure and a persuasive text and why it is important.
Today, Room 5 learning about structures. Structure is like putting things in order or putting things in the right places. I know I have learnt what a structure is when I have a thesis, three reasons and a conclusion.
Today, Room 5 learning about structures. Structure is like putting things in order or putting things in the right places. I know I have learnt what a structure is when I have a thesis, three reasons and a conclusion.
Writing - Market Letter
last week, Room 5 were learning how to write letters to markets. I know I have learnt how to write a letter to a market by writing him good words instead of rude words.
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