Factory Persuasion Writing By Gabrielle

WALT - persuade people to build/not build a factory on our courts

I agree that we should have a factory on our courts.

If they build a factory, we can have a competition and if we can win, we can design our new playground using with a wooden castle obstacles. We can run and move our muscles and it is good for our body.

If they build a factory, we can have a CCTV. If we have CCTV, our school can be guarded by cameras and it can be easier to protect our Chromebooks.

If they build a factory, we can have a small car park to take over the old junior playground. I want it to be taken over so the bird turd on the old junior playground can be washed away.

If we have a factory on our courts, they can replace the old junior playground to a car park so the bird turd on the park can be taken away, our school can own a CCTV to watch the school so it can be easier to remember the thieve's face and we can own a playground so we can use our muscles to climb ladders and hang on monkey bars.\