The most disgusting chocolate bar that I have ever tasted!

WALT - follow a proper structure of a recount.

I know this when I make a recount of the spider in my chocolate bar.

After school, I felt hungry and hot so I decided to buy a chocolate bar from the dairy. I found the cheapest one that I could find. It was only 60 cents.

Then I took a bite. When I looked at my chocolate bar, It was full of spiders but I didn’t notice the eggs. I only saw the spiders so I flicked the spiders off the bar. Without thinking, I took a bigger bite and tasted something different in the bar. I spat out the chewed up chocolate onto my hand. I moved some bits of the chocolate and found nothing. Then all of a sudden a daddy long legs comes out of it!

As soon as it jumped out of my hands, I took a peek of the hole where the daddy long legs came out from and found a dozen of spider eggs! YUCK! I thought to myself. I quickly grabbed my water bottle as fast as a cheetah and took huge gulps of water.

Now, before I would eat something, I would always check what’s inside just in case it was full of spiders.